*weeps* The characters, the writing style, the ACTION...it was all so beautiful... I REALLY FELT FOR EVERYONE IN THIS FIC LIKE OH MY GOSH IT FELT SO REAL Plus it was so long and I enjoyed every word of it. I was so sad when it ended You need to keep writing because this proves everything you do is perfect
I think you overdid it a bit. You have to introduce more people in such a novel. Sorry, but you're only getting 8/10 from me. But i liked the emotional depth you added for Nagisa. Even though I suck at writing, I can see the greatness in your writing. You just need practice. Because you clearly have a knack for composition.