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One day when Nagisa was a little boy, she saw 3 people.

Masaru Kyazure and Kouji.

She hated them and fed some ducks.
This is why I draw.
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Thelene Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I CAN'T STOP CRYING, THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL ;_;
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Equestrian-Equine Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student General Artist
........beautiful. 
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PirateGigs Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
Oh..
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Gaaras1Girl Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
So friggin' sexy!
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Reika-No-Kimi Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist
This is the same reason why i draw too :iconwhynotbothplz:
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Deidarakitty Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*weeps*
The characters, the writing style, the ACTION...it was all so beautiful...
I REALLY FELT FOR EVERYONE IN THIS FIC LIKE OH MY GOSH IT FELT SO REAL :icontearplz:
Plus it was so long and I enjoyed every word of it. I was so sad when it ended :iconohnoesplz:
You need to keep writing because this proves everything you do is perfect :iconawwyeahplz:

LMAO I SERIOUSLY LOVED THIS BAY AHAHAHAHAHA X'DDD
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Jyukai-Koudan Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013

This is a masterpiece :iconmanlytearsplz:

So deep and emotional <3


And the poetic ambiguity. Did she fed food to the ducks, or did she fed some ducks to the trio? *gets shot* No, jk, it's funny XD

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TraceofHatred Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YEAH!
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akkochi Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
This was so touching :iconmahfeelsplz: 

LOL :iconlooolplz: 
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a-hyue Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AHAHAHHAHAHHAAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAH :iconawwyeahplz: 

SO DEEP :iconfreddiememeplz::heart:

It's lovely :iconmanlytearsplz:
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KirCorn Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
..................................

ok

..........................

Good :iconpokerface3plz:
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RinmaiTobi Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
BEST. STORY. EVER. :la:
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Taminki Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think you overdid it a bit. :iconbitchpleaseplz: You have to introduce more people in such a novel. :iconheadnoplz: Sorry, but you're only getting 8/10 from me. :iconsoemotionalplz: But i liked the emotional depth you added for Nagisa. :iconmhmmmplz: Even though I suck at writing, I can see the greatness in your writing. You just need practice. Because you clearly have a knack for composition. :iconmanlysmileplz:
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chibi-kii Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconcutememeplz: you have so much talent
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TomokoYuina Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
HAHAHAA THIS IS SO AWESOME :iconlaughsplz:
Wonderful job.
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hridi-das Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The comments just made it even better :P
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AisteachSam Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Such moving three sentences :iconpandarunplz:
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EmperialMausi Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
:iconmanlytearsplz: Oh man look at you one day you'll be writing prose with me and friday and MK <3333
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Shikafy Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Did more in those 3 sentences than I did in my life :iconokayguyplz:
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Pack69Alpha Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Student Writer
*Grammar Nazi* You missed a comma between Masaru and Kyazure.... But other than that, it was beautiful.....
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darthmadigan Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
:iconwaldorfplz: - It's confusing, minimalist, and it has no solid structure, conflict, or resolution.
:iconstatlerplz: - It was short...
:iconwaldorfplz::iconstatlerplz: - We loved it!
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BayneezOne Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
HAHAHAAHAHA
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dreamchaser21 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013

Such passion in three sentences...

I feel the love...:iconbravoplz:

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BayneezOne Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
AHAHAAHAHAH Thanks mate :iconbedcryplz: <333
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dreamchaser21 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
You're welcome.;P
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emuyh Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
......
I was excited for nothing :iconhappy-smileplz:

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:iconbayneezone:
BayneezOne Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
-renames this fanfic "nothing"- :iconmanlytearsplz:
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:iconemuyh:
emuyh Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Now I'm excited for something :iconfuuuplz:
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SHRimp-i Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
AHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA :iconawwyeahplz: This is bootiful, Bay. :iconbiggrin-plz:
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:iconbayneezone:
BayneezOne Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
AAJAHAHAHAHA
THANKS BRUDDHA :iconsobbplz:
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SHRimp-i Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
DUDE
C'MERE
I MISS YOU 
:iconpandarunplz::iconbrohugplz: <333
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BayneezOne Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
I MISS YOU TOO :iconduckyrunplz: <33
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SHRimp-i Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
Bayyyyybladeeeeeee~, Where has you beeeeen? :iconpandarunplz::iconsobbplz: <33
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KazueAiri Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconbravoplz:
I feel the passion.
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:iconbayneezone:
BayneezOne Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
Hahhahaa x'D

I feel the passion too............ In my pants. :iconsexybrowsplz:
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:iconkazueairi:
KazueAiri Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nagisa did the right thing. :iconmegustaplz:
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MiyuKyuu Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
bootfiful
give me :iconmoarplz:
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:iconbayneezone:
BayneezOne Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
AHAHAH
One day. :iconcoolestplz:
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MiyuKyuu Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
:iconshameplz:
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Jinxaroni Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013

This was so movingg-- //pullin on those heart strings!

LOLOL

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:iconbayneezone:
BayneezOne Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
AHAHAH

I felt like there was too much romance. :iconmanlytearsplz:
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Jinxaroni Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013

Hmmm maaybe, i can see that. :iconpapmingplz:

You should add more drama next timee-- pfft xDD

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Tenshi--Hikari Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconslowclapplz:
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BayneezOne Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
:iconcrai-plz: thanks.
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:icontenshi--hikari:
Tenshi--Hikari Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconsawbplz: you're welcome. 
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